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    Break up stories into shorter bites?

    I second that. Is there any process in place already?
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    Break up stories into shorter bites?

    I'm facing a similar dilemma. (Figured I'd just piggyback off of this thread instead of posting a new one on the same subject.) I've got a piece that I'm looking for some feedback on, but it's a good 6300 words. I could post the whole thing, knowing full-well that I will likely not get any...
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    How do you make a flashback sequence more interesting?

    I have a flashback sequence that is going to take up a whole chapter. It needs to happen because it's where I give the reader a lot of information they need. And I figured it would be more interesting to show a lot of this information through the eyes of the main character rather than telling...
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    What should I be asking beta readers?

    Oh wow, those are some good questions! It's still a long list, but these seem like great ones to address broad issues. I'm really fond of: -At what point did you think, “Okay, now the story has started!” -Did you find any inconsistencies in this book? This could be in the timeline, concrete...
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    What should I be asking beta readers?

    I feel like I'm not really poised to get good feedback from beta readers. I basically feel like I'm still asking a generic "is this any good?" when I need to be asking questions that would reveal what my story really needs to change. What are some good questions to ask beta readers? What are...
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    Trying to decide which version to use

    I've got a story I've been working on. At the moment it's episodic; divided into a series of novellas. (I might revise that once I've got more of the story written.) It's a fantasy/alt-history setting. So I had this idea for a different way to handle a sequence near the end of my second...
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