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I'd thought about it, and tried. But first person is not my jam. My writing sounds super juvenile when I do it. And most of what I read...

Gotcha. I'm thinking italics without the tag. (Thanks for rewriting.) Dialogue is my strength--my beta readers have all said that--so...

She's a cat. It's about cats. But FYI, it's for adults, so they think and talk VERY much like people. Think: Feral Creatures and Hollow...

Oh. All good. It's not coming off as rude. I'm literally trying to not sound like a five-year-old, so cold truth is helpful.

Interesting. So the genre is animal fiction. The main character is neurotic. That's why I'm using inner monologue. I want the reader to...

My protagonist is a thinker. Very often her thoughts aren't just the POV of the book, but rather she has dialogue with herself, for...