Greetings all!

[marshall.guilmette]

Hello my name is marshall. Im brand new to the site and would love to get involved. Im not sure what the process looks like exactly but im writing a paper about my experience attempting to start a labor union at Amazon. I think my writing needs work before publishing and I would love to have expert opinions, like yourselves, to run over things and see if you find any clunky phrasing that I could clean up! Thanks in advance and so excited to be a part of the community!

 

[Homer Potvin]

Hi, Marshall and welcome to the forum. I deleted your attachment, as we do not allow external links of any kind of critique purposes (or much else for that matter). You are welcome to post in the non-fiction area of the Workshop if have something that needs critiquing. Bare in mind though that you are unlikely to get much feedback if the work is more than a few thousand words. And you will get far more responses if you critique other members of the community as well. You'll find a variety of stuff in the Workshop to choose from. Welcome aboard!

 

[Louanne Learning]

Hello and welcome to the forums!

 

[Naomasa298]

Welcome to the forum.

 

[THUNDAIR]

Welcome Marshall. I suppose your WIP about starting a union would be non-fiction.