Recent content by Donnie

Tradition.............! Tevye singing.

You are right, on light mode it it's hard to read. I'm not sure why. I live on dark mode where it looks fine. Thanks for the catch.

Like what you did in the last sentence it's smoother. Reads better. I'm not sure what you ment when you said , "The grey-on-white of the "cheap painting" is hard to read." (The grey -on-white part in particular). Thanks for reading and the feed back.👍

I've seen paintings of dying flowers, they can be quite beautiful. Thank again for reading it .

Thanks you are quite correct. He does not think or talk grammatically. Is that to much to fast. Maybe I should ease the reader into it. Or maybe do away most of the commas. If He is not thinking grammatically why should I bother with them. Thanks

Biremes

Nothing up my sleeve.

Hand and eye coordination.

Short story I've been working on. Kind of urban mystical noir. Would, you read the next sentence? Does it have that noir feel to it? All comments will be taken into consideration. Thanks A cheap painting of dying flowers hung on the wall of this dirty restaurant, I had a oilly cup of tea...

She thought he knew. He didn't.

Mexican flag

Green, white, and red.

Gointas. Jethro doing division tables.

Take away.

Antz