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Sympathy is great...when you can come by it honest. Otherwise, the most important part of a character is that they make sense in their...

- Protag is usually a male, usually a young adult at introduction, and frequently out of time or place - There are politics, though...

Were it me...I might upend this entirely. The moon had been set an hour when His Majesty's Ship Maasai edged into the habor at...

I sent probably my only (kinda) sci-fi effort. They said they liked it but rejected because there were two characters speaking and they...

That is one of the greatest signatures I've seen in a long time.

I've tried submitting to a couple places like that. Escape Pod and PodCastle come to mind. Haven't had any success, but I also don't...

Hello Raven, and welcome to Shiny WF.org. Feel free to quoth as much as you like.

i'll look into it but i don't think more than one prefix is possible... also the purpose of the prefixes is to enable us to easily split...

In the Workshop, can we have more than one prefix per thread? I often write cross-genre stories, and one doesn't necessarily describe a...

The Workshop is here to help. ;)

Just 300 words today, but that's what it took to re-establish tone and mindset. Also, I'm pantsing the scene (although not the plot)...

No no great examples. What you have written explains the issues I have with this one story I have left to one side for the moment...

With my editing hat on, there are ways you can edit this for different effect. "Stop moving, or I'll shoot!" His gun was pointed at the...

I owned every Famous Five book as a kid, but I never had that one.

But sometimes, changing the story can make it better - make it what it should have been in the first place. That was certainly the case...