Recent content by Novicewriter34

That’s the whole twist in my story, he’s stunted from growing at a young age, but as time goes on, he then continues to rapidly shrink to going beyond extremely short. It’s a major plot in my story, that at a young age, he continues to rapidly decrease in height, before he’s cybered up. But...

Is there something so unappealing about a protagonist being super short, due to torturous experiments done to them by the main villain, who happens to be much taller than the protagonist? Why is this such a terrible idea?

Thank you. I appreciate your feedback. Based on the idea of having a rollercoaster effect, I agree. The issue in this story is that the protagonist would have much of a life of failures, until his post augmentation. During that time during the protagonist’s failed trauma phase, I would say there...

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate the discussion. I agree that a 'stunted height resistance group' could risk seeming odd if taken at face value, but the core idea isn’t just about height discrimination in a vacuum. It’s about systemic bodily control, a covert program (think MKUltra meets...

I’m a bit confused? I’m a 5 foot male here who’s not Italian and I can assure you, It’s quite believable that severe problems do arise from this.

I’m still not sure which one to pick. It’s a tough decision for me, but thank you.

I wanted to start him as an adult. Maybe somewhere half point in his mundane broken life and stunted growth when he had already put on some weight and went from his two last failed jobs. Sorry, I’m not very good at writing this. I know my ideas are bad.

Thank you for your input. Are you suggesting that blending both ideas could have better potential?

Hello everyone, I’m new here to the forums. I’ve been struggling for a long time trying to decide which path is best for my protagonist and I can’t seem to figure out which would be more intriguing. Path #1; the protagonist grew up as a child having social anxieties and slight strange...