Recent content by ps102

It's best for you to have the ability to do it yourself. You want a view of it so if the landscape doesn't work for you, you can suggest modifications. After all, the idea is for us all to "view" the world through the same eyes so we can coordinate better. Browsers are not the best at zooming...

It's great! I loved reading it. I have to ask, where in the map are we right now? It's important for us to be in the same page, but also, we need to be doing world building. Them going to a nameless town isn't going to cut it. I'm not a huge fan of world building myself but it's pretty...

Also remember that Yuuna is with them (even if invisible), and Yuuna is literally the spirit that introduced music to the world. This is an incredibly important point for very later on. I'm not sure if she can play instruments. Remember the violin from her dreams? I haven't quite decided what...

Was this ever mentioned anywhere, because I didn't know! It's such a wonderful little fact.

Music is part of Olive's past, so it's fitting even. In fact, you gave me some ideas... As for fake names, here are three random that I found in the Internet. ClaraLatinBright, famous LunaLatinMoon ArabellaLatin“Yielding to prayer” I think they are cool.

Okay, I'm still working on the map. Unfortunately, because I'm an idiot, I forgot to save and every bit of progress since what I last showed to all of you got lost. But I haven't given up. I re-did all of the earth region and now only a portion of it remains, which I'm glad of since it has...

Wonderful! The continuation of Araspeth vs Olive is exactly what I had in mind. You hit the nail on the head. And the scene with Barnabas and the others was such a nice read. I wish there was more.

ZeroGPT sucks. Also, if you were to paste the story in a contest here, you'd probably get hit with the ban hammer in a matter of hours. In the other place (.com), I recall there was a user on one of the competitions who just blatantly pasted one of these stories. Everyone knew the truth and it...

As long as you're comfortable using it like that,, then it's fine :)

Okay here is the map! map link It's high resolution so you have to zoom a lot to see the little details like cities. If you like your computer's photo viewer better for things like this, you might want to download the image. As I said, this is only 1/3 of it. I wanted some feedback before I...

A lot can happen at Cliffcross and it probably will (it better do because it's been hyped a lot at this point). It just won't be story ending. What Gravy and I discussed, in case you missed it, is the Queen shows up and has a fight with Olive. Olive nearly dies but lives, and the story...

Exactly what I had in mind. "My Queen, although I tried... something most unexpected came my way!" There are a lot of possibilities here. I think they should arrive to Cliffcross far more bonded and ready to face whatever is there. Places bring opportunity. That said, 1/3 of the new map has...

I'm in favor of a confrontation between Melina and Olive at Cliffcross. It ends badly for Olive and a lot happens from there. Ravenna, Barnabas saving Ravenna, and all of which we discussed. There is then a second confrontation elsewhere in the country, which happens at the climax. It could...

Neither was I. It's too early. What I was saying though is—if we want it to end at Cliffcross, we can. We just need to lengthen the journey.

That's better. Thanks! I'll PM you to add more if I recall anything.