It Began in a Tavern (OOC Thread) (Part 2)

Here are the edits to be made.

“Queen Melina has captured the second fragment,”“Queen Melina has captured the green fragment of Gaia,”
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“And we’ve yet to even get a clue on the location of a fragment,”“And we’ve yet to even get a clue on the location of one,”


She raised the stone in her mouth and consumed itShe held the fragment of Hemera against her chest and submitted herself to it. The fragment, with a radiant glow, vanished within Pria and became part of her.
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A burning sensation appeared in the pit of her stomach then.Suddenly, her chest burned; her heart quickened its pace.

I can make the above to my own post, but the other one needs to be done with your mod powers, @Louanne Learning

We thankfully didn't need many edits since most of the time, they are just referred to as "the fragments".
 
I can make the above to my own post, but the other one needs to be done with your mod powers, @Louanne Learning

The first change is made. Thanks for finding it for us.

yes, you can do the second change, thanks so much.
 
While we're discussing revisions on previous posts, there's this post where Barnabas is taking notes about: "Subject H-01 was injected with fragment 002"

Assuming this fragment is a gear fragment, this might warrant a change as well considering they are now sufficiently large such that injection seems improbable.

 
Assuming this fragment is a gear fragment, this might warrant a change as well considering they are now sufficiently large such that injection seems improbable.
How did I miss this? Thanks for letting me know! We already talked about this and this line should be:

Subject H-01 was force fused with fragment 002

I'll make that change and any other like it. Thanks again for letting me know!
 
Okay, I'm dumb. This is not my post (even though I wrote it). I'll need your help again, @Louanne Learning

Subject H-01 was injected with fragment 002 -> Subject H-01 was force fused with fragment 002

Big edit incoming:
Ten seconds after injection fusion, subject showed signs of confusion. Ether network activity increased further during this time. Higher production of E-cells observed. Loss of control observed.​

Twenty seconds after injection fusion, Ether network activity increased exponential. Mental deterioration observed. Loss of control observed. Spatial distortions observed.​
Spatial distortions? Barnabas raised a brow and went on.​
Thirty seconds after injection fusion, Ether network activity continues to increase. Mental break down observed. Loss of sanity observed. Danger to environment highly likely.​

Thirty five seconds after injection fusion, emergency extraction of fragment performed. No immediate change in state. Fragment immediately sealed.​
Fourty seconds after injection fusion, Ether activity continues to increase. Spatial distortions reduced. Subject mental state continues to decline.​
End of log. Subject terminated on emergency. Experiment concluded fourty-three seconds after initial injection fusion.​
To this, add a line:

Force fusion series of experiments to brain dead subjects

Log entry: 003
Test Subject: H-01
Test Sequence: 032
 
I'm likely not going to have my post done until ~48 hours from this post. I thought I was going to be able to finish it today, but the schedule does not permit.
 
My post is live!

 
My post is live!

Excellent! Now we have Cliffcross in on the action! And the intrigue surrounding Wren grows...

Were those ghosts in the town the ghosts of the monks of Kodama Abbey?
 
I'm not sure to be honest, I was basing their presence on this line from ps102:

He stared back at her, wide eyed. He processed it all in silence until the discord of human screaming reached their ears. They looked at each other, ran up a small hill, and faced Cliffcross City, now unfrozen in time.

“What in the“—Olten paused when he witnessed hooded ghosts mixed among the living—“world?”

“Time flows again, only in a totally wrong way.”
 
They are. Arthur asked them at one point (I believe on the same post Olive was revived) to go and help towns that were in disarray due to the sun's dissaperance.

They don't have to stay permanently. Just enough to help. Also, the entire army of them isn't at Cliffcross. That wouldn't make sense.
 
All good! I love the way this story is developing!!
 
Post made. Goodness was that incredibly difficult! I struggled hard and it's certainly not really what I hoped for in this post, but it's a good prelude for what's to come for Sophia.

Looking forward to what you'll do with Ravenna and Katara, @Louanne Learning! I'm sure it will be a great adventure. I can't wait to see how you'll develop Katara.
 
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