That's a heckuva prompt... are they giving you so much to consider as options?Well, here's the early bird prompt:
Start by reading Katie Naughton’s poem, “Debt Ritual: Oysters.” Now, write your own poem in which you refer to a specific writer or artist (or work of literature/art) and make a declarative statement about want or desire. Set the poem in a particular, people-filled place, like a restaurant, bus station, museum, school, etc.
It's very specific. I was picturing single words and phrases for each day. If all the prompts are like this, I'll probably just take them very loosely as inspiration.
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And I like the first and last line of Naughton's poem, "it isn't exactly right to want what money has" and the beginning of sentence not in capital letters, as if there are no beginnings or endings.
I think I'll just save my creative energies for tomorrow.That's a heckuva prompt... are they giving you so much to consider as options?
So... you had already been planning to write a poem set in a people-filled location and referring to a specific writer/artist/piece of art?This is exactly why I hate prompts. It is the I was going to do the thing and then you told me to do the thing, so now I'm not going to do the thing simply out of spite.
I think I'll just save my creative energies for tomorrow.
So... you had already been planning to write a poem set in a people-filled location and referring to a specific writer/artist/piece of art?
Yeah as if the inner confusion of feelings and wants influenced the structure of the poem and had the lines all mixed up.There's a nice symmetry in it in what they want and what it costs and that slight feeling of confusion, I think, about whether it is really their own desires they're feeding. Some of the line breaks are a little too much work for me though without a little punctuation too.
If need be. Hallelujah!What if we're not prompt? Do we get prodded.
I liked Aubade too. It had a lovely set of imagery and seemed to incorporate the turn really well. I couldn't help but get inspired by the buzzards, thinking of the red kites that are everywhere where I live and have such an awesome keening cry. The insomniac ones felt a bit too cryptic to me but I liked the parody one. I appreciate that kind of plain silliness. There's definitely a craft to the story telling in them that's going to take me a lot longer to dig into.I like the idea of the tanka. It seems it's quite broad in theme. Aubade was lovely.