audreyhowitt
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@riddleywalker your imagery in #8 is just gorgeous!
@Woof <3 Refutable - an all too familiar sentiment. I'm curious if this was written in response to the day 8 prompt poem?
I learned about the blackout poetry for the first time today (reminds me of film editing), awesome challenge, wish I was less exhausted but will try writing more of it in the future.
Yeah I found a lot of catchy words and phrases but don't know if I successfully created the meaning in the poem, it probably needs rewriting. The challenge reminded me of the scene in a Bob Dylan documentary where he was playing with words in an improvisational way.I hadn't thought of it like that, it makes sense! I find it really difficult to find my own poems in blocks of my own text so tend to struggle even more with other people's but it can be fun. I remember when I was working in a library we did napo together and that was one of the prompts then too (must have been about 6/7 years ago). We tore books out of damaged books and sat and coloured out the words to try and distill something new from them. Maybe something that aligned with the original text or something opposite. It never bore fruit for me but I liked the idea. Now, I had more success with rewriting famous poems as limericks one year![]()
I love blackout poetry! I heard about it first from Austin Kleon. Going to have to do one retroactively.I learned about the blackout poetry for the first time today (reminds me of film editing), awesome challenge, wish I was less exhausted but will try writing more of it in the future.
That sounds really fun.We tore books out of damaged books and sat and coloured out the words to try and distill something new from them. Maybe something that aligned with the original text or something opposite.
I'll have to have a go at this later, when I have more time, it sounds fun.I learned about the blackout poetry for the first time today (reminds me of film editing), awesome challenge, wish I was less exhausted but will try writing more of it in the future.
I just did two attempts: one with a digital version and blackout bars, which somehow didn't work at all. Then with a photocopied version and a pen. The action of permanently removing text makes for a very different experience.I'll have to have a go at this later, when I have more time, it sounds fun.
Yes, it's very different isn't it! With a pen and paper there's a finality to it that you just have to make your decisions and work with them regardless which can be really surprising, and also just the act of blacking out/erasure with a good pen is very satisfying. I had a go digitally for this prompt and became indecisive, changing which words I chose constantly and got nowhere fast. It's good to make creativity tactile sometimes.I just did two attempts: one with a digital version and blackout bars, which somehow didn't work at all. Then with a photocopied version and a pen. The action of permanently removing text makes for a very different experience.
April 13th:
To get started with today’s prompt, first read Walter de la Mare’s poem “A Song of Enchantment.” Then, John Berryman’s poem “Footing Our Cabin’s Lawn, Before the Wood.” Both poems work very differently, yet leave you with a sense of the near-fantastical possibilities of the landscapes they describe. Try your hand today at writing your own poem about a remembered, cherished landscape. It could be your grandmother’s backyard, your schoolyard basketball court, or a tiny strip of woods near the railroad tracks. At some point in the poem, include language or phrasing that would be unusual in normal, spoken speech – like a rhyme, or syntax that feels old-fashioned or high-toned.
I think it is all a process--I feel like I am posting drafts in NaPo all the time--and I think that is fine--a good friend once told me that the poem will let me know when it is done--Have fun--write--read--and allow all the room you want for the poem to emerge as it is right now--Feeling a little drafty-self-consciousness today. Like a word shuffler, not a poet. Maybe it's trying to hard to do the prompts but I never quite feel like I have my voice as a poet yet, even after decades of dabbling. Prose, yes, I know what I sound like. Poetry is more elusive. That's why I like doing the prompts. For 30 days I'm just sampling a bunch of ice-cream flavours to see which one's my favourite and then maybe I can think about making sundaes later. It is helpful to read my things posted too, to view them at a little more distance from my own files at this early composition stage. Kind of shortcuts the old advice to shove it in a drawer for a week or two and then take it out and look at it with fresh eyes. Still loving sharing this process too![]()