You are brilliant. Quite close. It is a depiction of a Nuzhen general. The Nuzhens were an enemy whom Genghis Khan did fight with during his lifetime.
She walks in on the man she loves in bed with someone else....
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Depending on how much it impacts her, it could muddle her words.
"Your tea is ready." becomes "Your ___ing . . . tea!" and an accelerated mug.
If you had answered 'cold fury,' then just a normal sentence about tea would say plenty. I don't know why, but men just can't load venom into mundane phrases like women can.
All good ideas!
As this is an old post, i did eventually write the scene. I ended up with a flippant sentence and a play on words.
She brought a pot of soup for the sick woman.... sees them.... throws pot on the floor.... they spring apart..... she tells the guy "this isnt what i meant about coming to your senses!"..... she storms outside and shouts insults about the man and woman being together (to shame/humiliate them) so everyone can hear.
As this is an old post, i did eventually write the scene. I ended up with a flippant sentence and a play on words.
She brought a pot of soup for the sick woman.... sees them.... throws pot on the floor.... they spring apart..... she tells the guy "this isnt what i meant about coming to your senses!"..... she storms outside and shouts insults about the man and woman being together (to shame/humiliate them) so everyone can hear.
