It Began in a Tavern (OOC Thread) (Part 2)

Maybe Olive can muster this ghost army?
Perhaps, but I think it's best that the monks have an agency of their own.

What's interesting to me is that they were killed by the royal family—but Arthur is part of that family! It makes me wonder what their ghosts think of it.

Even more interesting is the fact that, once upon a time, Arthur himself was a corrupt royal. It was mentioned that he brought down villages by breathing fire. But he forgot his identity and went to live just like the rest of the population he looked so much down to. And it's because he did that he is now against the corrupt monarchy of the country. He is someone who has experience from both lives.

Or at least, that is how I interpret his character. I introduced him but @Louanne Learning was the one who fleshed him out, so the character belongs to her, I'd say. I have little saying on the matter.

The same thing happened with Araspeth. I introduced her but Louanne fleshed her out into who she is now. And I gotta say that you did a super amazing job. You're good at building characters.

Very exciting! So many different plot hooks are converging!
I agree! Let's maintain the excitement.
 
but I think it's best that the monks have an agency of their own.

great idea.

What's interesting to me is that they were killed by the royal family—but Arthur is part of that family! It makes me wonder what their ghosts think of it.

Even more interesting is the fact that, once upon a time, Arthur himself was a corrupt royal. It was mentioned that he brought down villages by breathing fire. But he forgot his identity and went to live just like the rest of the population he looked so much down to. And it's because he did that he is now against the corrupt monarchy of the country. He is someone who has experience from both lives.

excellent analysis, and opens up new ways to develop his character

And I gotta say that you did a super amazing job. You're good at building characters.

Thank you so much!

I love this collaborative story-telling!!
 
Welp, I was helping a friend move yesterday and it ended up taking about twice as long as I anticipated. I'd like to request an extension to the end of today if possible!
 
I did not manage to get to this, and with the holidays I won't have much time the next few days. I don't want to keep holding y'all up so you'll need to skip me this round.
 
I did not manage to get to this, and with the holidays I won't have much time the next few days. I don't want to keep holding y'all up so you'll need to skip me this round.
No worries! Stuff like that happens.

I'm European so I don't know much about Thanksgiving, but I hope you have a great time!
 
Heads up. I am making a small edit to this post.

There is an error in this line: Delta stood in the conference room all by herself, hood down. Her old, wise face stood against a tall doorway etched with ancient symbols...

Delta is not anywhere near as old as this makes it sound. When I was writing, I apparently also forgot that she has a pair of antlers on her head. I had actually forgotten this completely. But @Louanne Learning didn't and I give her props to that. She correctly described them on her posts.

I edited it into: Delta stood in the conference room all by herself, hood down. She faced a tall doorway etched with ancient symbols...

It makes so much more sense too. How can her face "stand" against the doorway? It's stuff like that which makes me question my level of intelligence.

I hope I didn't confuse anyone with this.
 
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