The Jade Empire - Official story

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This roleplay has spaces for 7 players. The list below shows the order of posting.


1. @Louanne Learning

2. @ellekaldwin

3. @buttercream

4. @IgnitedxSoul

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The Jade Empire

The British Concession, Shanghai City, China, Spring, 1858


The brick and stone Georgian townhouse, elegant in design, seemed an odd place to arrange a murder. But, in the dim library, a pervasive sense of corruption hung in the air, like evil ghosts.

“So,” the rich merchant asked, “you have no qualms about dispatching a man of peace?”

Rennie Macpherson hesitated briefly, but the coin he’d earn would keep him for a month. He didn’t like to kill more than he had to, but killing was better than carpentry. Besides, God knew, no such thing as a true man of peace existed. They hadn’t existed in Scotland, where he’d been a boy. They hadn’t existed in England, where he’d become a man. And they sure as hell didn’t darken Shanghai.

“Canna ye just have him removed?” Rennie asked.

“We need to send a message.”

“Bold message.”

“These are bold times.”

A missionary had seduced the merchant’s wife, and then had the temerity to preach against acquisition. “Nae qualms t’all,” Rennie replied.

***

Dressed head-to-toe in leathers, including his wide-brimmed hat, Rennie strode the bustling riverfront promenade, called the Bund, heading for the chapel where he would find his mark. He made a striking figure, tall and manly. Daisy, his loyal companion, was slung over his shoulder. An aether-pressured repeater rifle nearly four feet long, a marvel of brass and iron craftsmanship with an engraved mahogany stock, Daisy had never let Rennie down.

He peered up at the Union Jack flag billowing on the British steamship SS Hesperus, anchored in the Haungpu River among other naval and merchant vessels. He’d fought under that flag, as an enlisted gunner in the First Opium War. Rennie almost felt like laughing at where life had brought him since then, but there was no place for laughter in his life.

A commotion caught his eye. Two sailors tightly held between them what appeared to be a boy, dressed in loose-fitting robe and trousers. The swabs tugged their resisting prisoner, feet practically dragging, up the gangway. None of my business, Rennie thought.

Abruptly, he stopped in his tracks. Pursing his lips, he dropped his eyes and tried to extricate himself from any obligation, telling himself that everyone got caught, eventually, in one way or the other. But his eyelid twitched.

Some sailors liked both boys and girls. Whether it was his own stolen innocence, or all of the injustices he had witnessed, or something rotten inside himself looking for trouble—he did not stop to wonder why. He got his boot-clad feet in motion and leapt up the gangway and arrived up top just in time to see the two sailors drag their squirming prey into a tiny room, with a tarp door, beside the wheelhouse.

The ship’s deck was deserted. Rennie got Daisy off his shoulder. A chill wind blew in, and carried the smell of fouled water with it. Tamping down his breathing, he approached their hiding place. The high-pitched squeals of the captive reached Rennie’s ears, and he bristled at the gutlessness. He got to the tarp, and used Daisy’s stock to pull it aside.

The body under one of the sailors was flaying arms like a girl. “What goes on here?” Rennie demanded.

With a fierce scowl, he rolled off. “We’re the Queen’s own men!” he screeched.

Rennie levelled his rifle. “An’ the Queen would be mighty ashamed o’ such lecherous behavior.”

“Piss off, you. It’s a heathen!”

It would have been so easy to blast them to perdition. But Rennie surely wasn’t going to kill for free. “Be gone,” he commanded.

At the point of a gun, they grumbled, and then scrambled past him. The seized one, now saved, got up, and brought her—it was a she!—earnest face up before his. The beauty of the Chinese woman, dressed like a boy, caught Rennie off guard. The desperate emotion in her big, brown eyes made his mouth go dry. “Thank you,” she said, then ran away.

Rennie took a moment to compose himself. Then, an anger of no name rose. Without seeing, he searched the corners of the small compartment, turned about, and stared hard at the deck boards. What the hell was he doing here?

He needed to go and kill.

***

The Walled Chinese City of Shanghai, Nanshi

Daiyu Chen sighed with relief once she had entered Nanshi through the Xiaonan gate. She would never tell her parents, Mei and Hao, about the terrible incident on a British steamship. They would dote and worry, and might even lay restrictions on her.

In her estimation, the Foreigners were stupid and brutal, and did not live in harmony with the Dao. But that man, the man who had saved her, settled in her mind like rain on dry earth, seeping in deep. But no single act of kindness could ever blot the cold calculations of the invaders, in mass.

Daiyu hesitated to go home. She took the narrow streets to the City God Temple, in the heart of the walled city, and entered the wide hall decorated in red and gold. The steam-powered qi-flow engines hummed softly, circulating the air. A few pilgrims made offerings at the incense burners, and others meditated. Daiyu strolled towards the main altar, lacquered in red and black, on a raised wooden dais. The altar held a statue of the stern-faced City God—Chenghuang—and a bowl of mandarin oranges, a symbol of good luck.

Standing before the altar, Daiyu tried to steer herself onto the path of the Dao. But how could she be natural when so much unnaturalness surrounded her?

A robed priest silently came up beside her. They stood side by side. Daiyu balled her fists, then asked, “How can I be in balance with such unfamiliar creatures?”

“The colonizers?”

“Yes.”

“Focus on self-cultivation—”

“Foreign devils—”

“Ah, well, yes,” the priest sighed, “—their hair is strange colors.”

Daiyu peered sideways at the priest. “They would make good dragon food.”

“It is easy to mock,” he replied. “Less easy to understand, and return compassion.”

Daiyu understood well enough. She said no more on the subject. One quick glance at the priest, and then she excused herself and strode to a meditation chamber along the north wall. Large enough to sit inside, the pod was made of wood, brass, and stained glass, and resembled a lotus flower. Gears driven by steam power rotated the pod during the day, to align with the natural light, and the flow of qi.

Daiyu’s breathing quieted. She leaned back in the plush chair and closed her eyes. The rugged face of the man who had rescued her sprang full force to her mind. A corner of her mouth curled up. He might have been a foreign devil, but he was a handsome devil, too.

Aghast at her own thought, Daiyu lurched forward in her chair and dropped her head in her hands. A poem, yes, she must try to write a poem.

When the lion and the dragon meet

The leather-clad man’s expression of surprise commandeered her mind’s eye. She grinned. For some strange reason, her effect on him felt like a victory.
 
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Old Teahouse Road, Southwestern District, Shanghai – Spring, 1858
Under smog-smeared stars, near the bones of Pine River Teahouse

A low, rhythmic hum floated through the smoke-choked air like breath through copper pipes. It pulsed like the heartbeat of something not quite alive, carved and coaxed into motion from memory and wood. The sound threaded through the bramble-choked ruins, stirring motes of ash and the scent of scorched pine.

Jiàn Lù crouched beside a fallen garden wall, breath steady, blade loose at her side. The drone glided in a slow arc above, its wings of polished cedar sweeping wide like a hawk in low flight, their curves etched with chi-marks only a master artisan could craft. It moved with grace, too much grace for a local spycraft model. Something hand made. Something sacred.

She recognized the pattern etched on its hull.

The drone veered right, searching, then clicked softly in her direction before darting toward the cracked well at the center of the ruins.

There, a figure knelt beside the stones, brushing the lichen away with fingertips as if reading dust and memory. A girl, young and slight, wrapped in a patched brown tunic. Copper-threaded braids glinted under the quarter moon.

The drone gave a soft chime.

The girl looked up and smiled.

Jiàn didn’t move, but her hand hovered near her blade. There was only one person who could smile like that here, among ghosts in the stones and danger in the air.

“Tala,” Jiàn said aloud.

“You’re late,” the girl called, rising smoothly to her feet.

“You’re early,” Jiàn replied, stepping from the shadows.

“I had a dream,” Tala said, voice light but steady. “One of the machine spirits showed me a lion made of smoke, and a river made of blood.”

Jiàn raised an eyebrow. “That could describe most of this city.”

“But this one had your face in it.”

Jiàn smirked faintly. “You always say that.”

Tala shrugged, and Cedarheart, the drone, fluttered down to her shoulder like it belonged there. Because it did. Tala had built it with her own hands, from Cascade cedar and Shanghai brass, after surviving a dirigible crash and the madness that followed. No one else heard machines quite like she did - not even Jiàn.

“I’ve been tracking your path for days,” Tala said. “Through steam tunnels, catwalks, even a noodle stall. You dropped something off with a runner.”

Jiàn’s smirk faded. “You were following me?”

“Only a little.” Tala stepped forward, holding up a pendant - a gear wrapped in a copper raven’s claw. “And only because Cedarheart told me you were in trouble.”

Jiàn studied the charm, then the girl’s face. “You’ve gotten better at tracking.”

“You’ve gotten worse at hiding,” Tala said back. “That courtyard kata you did yesterday? Visible from half the rooftops in Old Town.”

The ruins whispered around them as the city muttered beyond the horizon. The wind stirred a broken signboard, half-buried in vines: Pine River Teahouse.

“I thought this place was cleared out,” Tala murmured, glancing at the well, the darkness that seemed to trap moonlight.

“It was,” Jiàn said. “Which means someone’s built something below.”

She tapped her boot on the cracked earth. Hollow.

“Colonials?” Tala asked.

“No flags. No uniforms. But the ground hums, and machines whisper when I walk here. Something old is waking.”

Cedarheart gave a low, nervous chirp. A new rhythm had begun somewhere deeper like the turning of unseen gears in the belly of the city.

Tala’s brow furrowed. “It’s not just your presence that drew me. The drone felt a pull here. Something… familiar, but wrong.”

Jiàn’s blade slid free, quiet as breath. A haze of vapor rolled off its edge, and Cedarheart clicked in harmony.

Then a ripple of chi shimmered between the drone and the mist blade, brief and translucent. Jiàn’s hand instinctively went to the hilt.

It unnerved Jiàn each time it happened. That harmonious synchronicity between the two machines, as if connected as part of something bigger. That connection is what made Jiàn accept Tala into her journey.

They stood in silence—two figures cast in iron and smoke, bound by something older than either fully understood.

“Where did you find the schematic for that drone?” Jiàn asked finally.

“In a medicine pouch,” Tala said. “After the Treaty. My grandfather said it came from a Thunderbird that flew east before the world was split.”

Jiàn frowned. “East? Toward China?”

“Toward the sun,” Tala corrected. “He said it would find someone waiting.”

Jiàn’s gaze dropped. Her blade trembled as though remembering something. Her old mentor - the foreigner court inventor who vanished during the Red Reforms - had once spoken of schematics too advanced for their time. He called them echo-machines. Tools left behind by gods or ancestors. She had never believed him.

Until she met Tala.

“Your industrialist,” Jiàn said slowly. “The one who took you from America and brought you to Shanghai.”

Tala nodded. “Tobias Locke.”

Jiàn’s jaw clenched. “He was at court once. Traitor to the Emperor. A thief of breath and blueprints.”

“So we both lost something to him.”

“Yes,” Jiàn’s voice was steel. “But not for much longer.”

The moon slipped behind rain-heavy clouds. Beneath them, the earth let out a low groan - mechanical, ancient, waking.

“We go down?” Tala asked, already lifting Cedarheart into a soft hover.

Jiàn nodded. “Not as prey.”

“Not as prey,” she repeated, stepping toward the well. “As the storm they never saw coming.”

Together, they moved - one trained in shadows, the other in spirit - bound by iron, memory, and the fire of lost homelands.
 
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Wang Private School, Classroom 2, in the suburbs of Southeastern Shanghai

The classroom, only around a mere three-hundred chi in area, felt large without the children. Four bare desks, twelve empty seats. Darkness spilled in through the window. The only noises came from Shaohua shuffling through papers and from the occasional gust of wind outside.

It was more peaceful this way, albeit less interesting. Much of the pleasure from this profession came from excited chatter and wide eyes shining with curiosity. To review assignments was not quite as enjoyable but needed to be done. Shaohua couldn't formulate effective lesson plans if he didn't monitor his students' progress.

Given XunXun and Wenrang's poor spelling, it'd be best to have everyone practice character writing again.

Such mistakes would have been unacceptable were this an academy. Official institutions stressed perfection and subservience and punished those who didn't meet their standards, sometimes with extreme measures. Eighteen years ago, Shaohua questioned a teacher's hypocrisy; his resulting injuries took over a month to heal. A peer from a different class was executed for causing one too many disturbances four years later.

Fortunately, this was not an imperial school, and none of the students were on their way to one. Shaohua and Mr. Wang, this school's founder, were free to teach whatever they so pleased and to hold the children to their own standards. He wasn't sure about Mr. Wang, but Shaohua certainly didn't own a stick.

Even Confucius had flaws—he said so himself several times.

It was, in part, why Shaohua hadn't a modicum of interest in taking the imperial examination. He didn't have to be a scholar to share his knowledge, so he wasn't going to bother. Everyone who knew him was more than aware of his abilities, and that was all that mattered.

Though he wasn't a bureaucrat like his father and elder brothers, he still wore a jade pendant: an accessory to women, and a status symbol to educated men. It showcased his history so he didn't have to.

He liked the way it looked, also.

A sudden crick in his back put his assessment on pause. Seemed he'd been still for too long. Shaohua stretched backward to work the muscle, then retrieved his brass pocket watch from his trousers.

Yes, a few hours have passed since he dismissed the boys. It was getting late.

Shaohua returned the device to his pocket and gathered the soft bamboo papers from his desk into his leather document bag. He blew out the candle to his left as he slung the bag over his shoulder, rising to a stand. His boots sounded heavy against the wooden floor despite his light footsteps. He grabbed his umbrella on the way out.

Damp must greeted his nostrils upon exiting the schoolhouse. Tiny snail shells dotted the walls. Blurry stars became more obscure behind grey clouds—only stratocumulus formations, it looked, but the earthly balance felt off all day. Water was soon going to overtake Wood: a heavy precipitation was surely on the way.

He had to make haste.

Shoahua hurried toward Nanshi, the walled part of the city. The sky grew gloomier by the minute. Occasional gentle moisture droplets fell against him, most tangible on his hands and the back of his head. Specks of mist began to line the path before him.

He stopped just outside the Great Southern Gate to allow an orchardist to pass through with his cart of peaches, pears, and apricots.

Bigger, heavier raindrops awaited him on the other side. Shaohua stopped again before stepping out from the Wall's protection. The intricate painting of Mount Qiyun on the navy-blue canopy of his oil-paper umbrella was not very visible with the lack of light. A bit disappointing, but its beauty was not its purpose.

After watching the downpour for a few seconds, Shaohua covered himself and pressed onward. His family home over in the northwest of the Old City was quite the distance away.

Water began to accumulate into small puddles on the gravel. Even as the rain continued without storm and the last remnants of the bustle of the city began to die down the further west Shaohua went, the water did not feel calm as it should have. The strange qi in the air remained.

Perhaps he'd have to make time to visit a temple within the next few days. He hadn't been in a while. It very well may have been his own negative energy plaguing him.

Though it felt greater than himself.
 
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