The Jade Empire - Official story

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This thread is for posting official entries into our collaborative story. Please post all comments to the OOC thread.

This roleplay has spaces for 7 players. The list below shows the order of posting.


1. @Louanne Learning

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The Jade Empire

The British Concession, Shanghai City, China, Spring, 1858


The brick and stone Georgian townhouse, elegant in design, seemed an odd place to arrange a murder. But, in the dim library, a pervasive sense of corruption hung in the air, like evil ghosts.

“So,” the rich merchant asked, “you have no qualms about dispatching a man of peace?”

Rennie Macpherson hesitated briefly, but the coin he’d earn would keep him for a month. He didn’t like to kill more than he had to, but killing was better than carpentry. Besides, God knew, no such thing as a true man of peace existed. They hadn’t existed in Scotland, where he’d been a boy. They hadn’t existed in England, where he’d become a man. And they sure as hell didn’t darken Shanghai.

“Canna ye just have him removed?” Rennie asked.

“We need to send a message.”

“Bold message.”

“These are bold times.”

A missionary had seduced the merchant’s wife, and then had the temerity to preach against acquisition. “Nae qualms t’all,” Rennie replied.

***

Dressed head-to-toe in leathers, including his wide-brimmed hat, Rennie strode the bustling riverfront promenade, called the Bund, heading for the chapel where he would find his mark. He made a striking figure, tall and manly. Daisy, his loyal companion, was slung over his shoulder. An aether-pressured repeater rifle nearly four feet long, a marvel of brass and iron craftsmanship with an engraved mahogany stock, Daisy had never let Rennie down.

He peered up at the Union Jack flag billowing on the British steamship SS Hesperus, anchored in the Haungpu River among other naval and merchant vessels. He’d fought under that flag, as an enlisted gunner in the First Opium War. Rennie almost felt like laughing at where life had brought him since then, but there was no place for laughter in his life.

A commotion caught his eye. Two sailors tightly held between them what appeared to be a boy, dressed in loose-fitting robe and trousers. The swabs tugged their resisting prisoner, feet practically dragging, up the gangway. None of my business, Rennie thought.

Abruptly, he stopped in his tracks. Pursing his lips, he dropped his eyes and tried to extricate himself from any obligation, telling himself that everyone got caught, eventually, in one way or the other. But his eyelid twitched.

Some sailors liked both boys and girls. Whether it was his own stolen innocence, or all of the injustices he had witnessed, or something rotten inside himself looking for trouble—he did not stop to wonder why. He got his boot-clad feet in motion and leapt up the gangway and arrived up top just in time to see the two sailors drag their squirming prey into a tiny room, with a tarp door, beside the wheelhouse.

The ship’s deck was deserted. Rennie got Daisy off his shoulder. A chill wind blew in, and carried the smell of fouled water with it. Tamping down his breathing, he approached their hiding place. The high-pitched squeals of the captive reached Rennie’s ears, and he bristled at the gutlessness. He got to the tarp, and used Daisy’s stock to pull it aside.

The body under one of the sailors was flaying arms like a girl. “What goes on here?” Rennie demanded.

With a fierce scowl, he rolled off. “We’re the Queen’s own men!” he screeched.

Rennie levelled his rifle. “An’ the Queen would be mighty ashamed o’ such lecherous behavior.”

“Piss off, you. It’s a heathen!”

It would have been so easy to blast them to perdition. But Rennie surely wasn’t going to kill for free. “Be gone,” he commanded.

At the point of a gun, they grumbled, and then scrambled past him. The seized one, now saved, got up, and brought her—it was a she!—earnest face up before his. The beauty of the Chinese woman, dressed like a boy, caught Rennie off guard. The desperate emotion in her big, brown eyes made his mouth go dry. “Thank you,” she said, then ran away.

Rennie took a moment to compose himself. Then, an anger of no name rose. Without seeing, he searched the corners of the small compartment, turned about, and stared hard at the deck boards. What the hell was he doing here?

He needed to go and kill.

***

The Walled Chinese City of Shanghai, Nanshi

Daiyu Chen sighed with relief once she had entered Nanshi through the Xiaonan gate. She would never tell her parents, Mei and Hao, about the terrible incident on a British steamship. They would dote and worry, and might even lay restrictions on her.

In her estimation, the Foreigners were stupid and brutal, and did not live in harmony with the Dao. But that man, the man who had saved her, settled in her mind like rain on dry earth, seeping in deep. But no single act of kindness could ever blot the cold calculations of the invaders, in mass.

Daiyu hesitated to go home. She took the narrow streets to the City God Temple, in the heart of the walled city, and entered the wide hall decorated in red and gold. The steam-powered qi-flow engines hummed softly, circulating the air. A few pilgrims made offerings at the incense burners, and others meditated. Daiyu strolled towards the main altar, lacquered in red and black, on a raised wooden dais. The altar held a statue of the stern-faced City God—Chenghuang—and a bowl of mandarin oranges, a symbol of good luck.

Standing before the altar, Daiyu tried to steer herself onto the path of the Dao. But how could she be natural when so much unnaturalness surrounded her?

A robed priest silently came up beside her. They stood side by side. Daiyu balled her fists, then asked, “How can I be in balance with such unfamiliar creatures?”

“The colonizers?”

“Yes.”

“Focus on self-cultivation—”

“Foreign devils—”

“Ah, well, yes,” the priest sighed, “—their hair is strange colors.”

Daiyu peered sideways at the priest. “They would make good dragon food.”

“It is easy to mock,” he replied. “Less easy to understand, and return compassion.”

Daiyu understood well enough. She said no more on the subject. One quick glance at the priest, and then she excused herself and strode to a meditation chamber along the north wall. Large enough to sit inside, the pod was made of wood, brass, and stained glass, and resembled a lotus flower. Gears driven by steam power rotated the pod during the day, to align with the natural light, and the flow of qi.

Daiyu’s breathing quieted. She leaned back in the plush chair and closed her eyes. The rugged face of the man who had rescued her sprang full force to her mind. A corner of her mouth curled up. He might have been a foreign devil, but he was a handsome devil, too.

Aghast at her own thought, Daiyu lurched forward in her chair and dropped her head in her hands. A poem, yes, she must try to write a poem.

When the lion and the dragon meet

The leather-clad man’s expression of surprise commandeered her mind’s eye. She grinned. For some strange reason, her effect on him felt like a victory.
 
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Old Teahouse Road, Southwestern District, Shanghai – Spring, 1858
Under smog-smeared stars, near the bones of Pine River Teahouse

A low, rhythmic hum floated through the smoke-choked air like breath through copper pipes. It pulsed like the heartbeat of something not quite alive, carved and coaxed into motion from memory and wood. The sound threaded through the bramble-choked ruins, stirring motes of ash and the scent of scorched pine.

Jiàn Lù crouched beside a fallen garden wall, breath steady, blade loose at her side. The drone glided in a slow arc above, its wings of polished cedar sweeping wide like a hawk in low flight, their curves etched with chi-marks only a master artisan could craft. It moved with grace, too much grace for a local spycraft model. Something hand made. Something sacred.

She recognized the pattern etched on its hull.

The drone veered right, searching, then clicked softly in her direction before darting toward the cracked well at the center of the ruins.

There, a figure knelt beside the stones, brushing the lichen away with fingertips as if reading dust and memory. A girl, young and slight, wrapped in a patched brown tunic. Copper-threaded braids glinted under the quarter moon.

The drone gave a soft chime.

The girl looked up and smiled.

Jiàn didn’t move, but her hand hovered near her blade. There was only one person who could smile like that here, among ghosts in the stones and danger in the air.

“Tala,” Jiàn said aloud.

“You’re late,” the girl called, rising smoothly to her feet.

“You’re early,” Jiàn replied, stepping from the shadows.

“I had a dream,” Tala said, voice light but steady. “One of the machine spirits showed me a lion made of smoke, and a river made of blood.”

Jiàn raised an eyebrow. “That could describe most of this city.”

“But this one had your face in it.”

Jiàn smirked faintly. “You always say that.”

Tala shrugged, and Cedarheart, the drone, fluttered down to her shoulder like it belonged there. Because it did. Tala had built it with her own hands, from Cascade cedar and Shanghai brass, after surviving a dirigible crash and the madness that followed. No one else heard machines quite like she did - not even Jiàn.

“I’ve been tracking your path for days,” Tala said. “Through steam tunnels, catwalks, even a noodle stall. You dropped something off with a runner.”

Jiàn’s smirk faded. “You were following me?”

“Only a little.” Tala stepped forward, holding up a pendant - a gear wrapped in a copper raven’s claw. “And only because Cedarheart told me you were in trouble.”

Jiàn studied the charm, then the girl’s face. “You’ve gotten better at tracking.”

“You’ve gotten worse at hiding,” Tala said back. “That courtyard kata you did yesterday? Visible from half the rooftops in Old Town.”

The ruins whispered around them as the city muttered beyond the horizon. The wind stirred a broken signboard, half-buried in vines: Pine River Teahouse.

“I thought this place was cleared out,” Tala murmured, glancing at the well, the darkness that seemed to trap moonlight.

“It was,” Jiàn said. “Which means someone’s built something below.”

She tapped her boot on the cracked earth. Hollow.

“Colonials?” Tala asked.

“No flags. No uniforms. But the ground hums, and machines whisper when I walk here. Something old is waking.”

Cedarheart gave a low, nervous chirp. A new rhythm had begun somewhere deeper like the turning of unseen gears in the belly of the city.

Tala’s brow furrowed. “It’s not just your presence that drew me. The drone felt a pull here. Something… familiar, but wrong.”

Jiàn’s blade slid free, quiet as breath. A haze of vapor rolled off its edge, and Cedarheart clicked in harmony.

Then a ripple of chi shimmered between the drone and the mist blade, brief and translucent. Jiàn’s hand instinctively went to the hilt.

It unnerved Jiàn each time it happened. That harmonious synchronicity between the two machines, as if connected as part of something bigger. That connection is what made Jiàn accept Tala into her journey.

They stood in silence—two figures cast in iron and smoke, bound by something older than either fully understood.

“Where did you find the schematic for that drone?” Jiàn asked finally.

“In a medicine pouch,” Tala said. “After the Treaty. My grandfather said it came from a Thunderbird that flew east before the world was split.”

Jiàn frowned. “East? Toward China?”

“Toward the sun,” Tala corrected. “He said it would find someone waiting.”

Jiàn’s gaze dropped. Her blade trembled as though remembering something. Her old mentor - the foreigner court inventor who vanished during the Red Reforms - had once spoken of schematics too advanced for their time. He called them echo-machines. Tools left behind by gods or ancestors. She had never believed him.

Until she met Tala.

“Your industrialist,” Jiàn said slowly. “The one who took you from America and brought you to Shanghai.”

Tala nodded. “Tobias Locke.”

Jiàn’s jaw clenched. “He was at court once. Traitor to the Emperor. A thief of breath and blueprints.”

“So we both lost something to him.”

“Yes,” Jiàn’s voice was steel. “But not for much longer.”

The moon slipped behind rain-heavy clouds. Beneath them, the earth let out a low groan - mechanical, ancient, waking.

“We go down?” Tala asked, already lifting Cedarheart into a soft hover.

Jiàn nodded. “Not as prey.”

“Not as prey,” she repeated, stepping toward the well. “As the storm they never saw coming.”

Together, they moved - one trained in shadows, the other in spirit - bound by iron, memory, and the fire of lost homelands.
 
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Wang Private School, Classroom 2, in the suburbs of Southeastern Shanghai

The classroom, only around a mere three-hundred chi in area, felt large without the children. Four bare desks, twelve empty seats. Darkness spilled in through the window. The only noises came from Shaohua shuffling through papers and from the occasional gust of wind outside.

It was more peaceful this way, albeit less interesting. Much of the pleasure from this profession came from excited chatter and wide eyes shining with curiosity. To review assignments was not quite as enjoyable but needed to be done. Shaohua couldn't formulate effective lesson plans if he didn't monitor his students' progress.

Given XunXun and Wenrang's poor spelling, it'd be best to have everyone practice character writing again.

Such mistakes would have been unacceptable were this an academy. Official institutions stressed perfection and subservience and punished those who didn't meet their standards, sometimes with extreme measures. Eighteen years ago, Shaohua questioned a teacher's hypocrisy; his resulting injuries took over a month to heal. A peer from a different class was executed for causing one too many disturbances four years later.

Fortunately, this was not an imperial school, and none of the students were on their way to one. Shaohua and Mr. Wang, this school's founder, were free to teach whatever they so pleased and to hold the children to their own standards. He wasn't sure about Mr. Wang, but Shaohua certainly didn't own a stick.

Even Confucius had flaws—he said so himself several times.

It was, in part, why Shaohua hadn't a modicum of interest in taking the imperial examination. He didn't have to be a scholar to share his knowledge, so he wasn't going to bother. Everyone who knew him was more than aware of his abilities, and that was all that mattered.

Though he wasn't a bureaucrat like his father and elder brothers, he still wore a jade pendant: an accessory to women, and a status symbol to educated men. It showcased his history so he didn't have to.

He liked the way it looked, also.

A sudden crick in his back put his assessment on pause. Seemed he'd been still for too long. Shaohua stretched backward to work the muscle, then retrieved his brass pocket watch from his trousers.

Yes, a few hours have passed since he dismissed the boys. It was getting late.

Shaohua returned the device to his pocket and gathered the soft bamboo papers from his desk into his leather document bag. He blew out the candle to his left as he slung the bag over his shoulder, rising to a stand. His boots sounded heavy against the wooden floor despite his light footsteps. He grabbed his umbrella on the way out.

Damp must greeted his nostrils upon exiting the schoolhouse. Tiny snail shells dotted the walls. Blurry stars became more obscure behind grey clouds—only stratocumulus formations, it looked, but the earthly balance felt off all day. Water was soon going to overtake Wood: a heavy precipitation was surely on the way.

He had to make haste.

Shoahua hurried toward Nanshi, the walled part of the city. The sky grew gloomier by the minute. Occasional gentle moisture droplets fell against him, most tangible on his hands and the back of his head. Specks of mist began to line the path before him.

He stopped just outside the Great Southern Gate to allow an orchardist to pass through with his cart of peaches, pears, and apricots.

Bigger, heavier raindrops awaited him on the other side. Shaohua stopped again before stepping out from the Wall's protection. The intricate painting of Mount Qiyun on the navy-blue canopy of his oil-paper umbrella was not very visible with the lack of light. A bit disappointing, but its beauty was not its purpose.

After watching the downpour for a few seconds, Shaohua covered himself and pressed onward. His family home over in the northwest of the Old City was quite the distance away.

Water began to accumulate into small puddles on the gravel. Even as the rain continued without storm and the last remnants of the bustle of the city began to die down the further west Shaohua went, the water did not feel calm as it should have. The strange qi in the air remained.

Perhaps he'd have to make time to visit a temple within the next few days. He hadn't been in a while. It very well may have been his own negative energy plaguing him.

Though it felt greater than himself.
 
Daiyu strode through the courtyard of their Nanshi home and entered the sparsely-furnished main chamber, dimly lit by gaslight. She stopped short at the scene that greeted her. Her grandparents and parents sat stoically on stools, on either side of the room. Between them stood the matchmaker, an old woman named Tíng, and a stout man dressed in crisp linens whom she had never seen before. She glanced from one face to another. “What’s this?”

Her father, Hao, dropped his eyes. Her mother, Mei, came towards her and guided her to sit on the stool she’d vacated. “My dear daughter,” she began, “we are honored with a visit from Li Ming. He has a promise to guard your future security and happiness.”

“How?”

She hesitated. “In marriage.”

Daiyu’s heart thumped. She snapped her eyes to Hao, looking for a sign that this was some sort of mistake. He allowed sadness to come into his face. “We have been negligent,” he said, “in securing your future. Your mother and I cannot live forever, and there must be a place for you after we are gone.”

“It is a good match,” Tíng said. “It will bring much harmony between the families.”

Daiyu gaped at this man, Li Ming. In return, he offered a smile. “I will not interfere in your independence,” he said. “But I hope you will give me many sons.”

Daiyu sprang up, onto her feet. “Have you all gone mad?”

“Your horoscopes are compatible,” Tíng mentioned.

“I find your feistiness attractive,” Li Ming put in. “Please permit me to make my case. I have a good position with the civil service. You will never want for anything. My ancestors are honorable, and will welcome you to our bosom. Most importantly, I am a generous man, and will grant you some measure of freedom.”

A generous man! As if her freedom was his possession, something he would apportion to her.

Mei placed her hand on Daiyu’s arm. “I have found much happiness with your father,” she said. “You too can find happiness, if you allow it.”

“I will not allow it!” Daiyu cried.

Li Ming dipped his chin. “I have made an appointment for you with the dressmaker,” he said.

She reeled. “And I will not be ambushed, in this despicable manner!”

Fighting tears, she tore from the room and out the front door and jogged through the narrow, winding alleys. Her parents’ betrayal stuck in her throat like claws ripping her from the inside-out. That they would put her in a position where she had no choice but to be disobedient felt like a shattering of her world.

***

Rennie went to the The Red Jack Tar, a rustic tavern at the muddy corner of Consulate Road and Queen Street, in the British Concession. The floors were uneven and the beer warm. His face hard and set, he sat alone against the wall, with his tumbler of stout ale.

He always lost his appetite after he’d killed. Taking another life in fact fed some ill-defined, dark part inside of him, which turned his stomach against food. It’s not that he gained any personal satisfaction by killing. No, satisfaction was not the word. His only reward was the coin. It was as if denying himself after he’d denied another his breath brought a modicum of justice to the entire sordid affair.

Rennie didn’t think too long on it. He might develop a conscience, and that would be bad for business.

No, instead he would do what he normally did after a job. He would disappear for a while, go to where he’d try not to think at all—to the Jixi wilderness, to the west. The region boasted vast, rugged forests. He could get lost in the woods. Though he might cross paths with the odd hermit or reclusive monk, the area was empty of people, and far from the corruption of the city.

Rennie dropped his eyes. It did not escape him that he carried some corruption within himself anywhere he went.

***

Daiyu ran all the way to the City God Temple, coming to a stumbling halt once inside. She gravitated to the statue of Chenghuang, the City God, on the altar. With desperation in her eyes, she offered up a silent prayer. You scorn forced outcomes. Do not let this be my forced outcome.

Roughly, she wiped the tears from her face. A light hand placed on her shoulder startled her. The bearer of the comfort—a man only as tall as she, with braided hair reaching to his waist, and black, catlike eyes, regarded her with sympathy. “I am Shaohua,” he said. “You may call me Jizhong. I am sorry to see your distress, and thought you could use a friend.”

“I do not want what other women want,” Daiyu hissed, in a sharp whisper.

He recoiled, and then a corner of his mouth curled up. “And I do not want what other men want,” he said. “We are a well-matched pair. I have found some joy in my difference. I pray it can be the same for you.”

Daiyu furrowed her brow. “My parents have arranged a marriage for me,” she confessed, with spite.

“It does not suit you?”

“No, it does not!”

“Yes, yes, very unfortunate—”

“But, even worse … I thought I knew my parents. Disappointment has never come between us. Now, I must disappoint them, and that is the hardest part.”

Shaohua slumped. “Ah, yes, disappointment. It fell upon me with my refusal to take the imperial examination.”

Daiyu peered at him sideways. “Did your father forgive you?”

He shrugged. “One’s experience does not indicate another’s.”

They both turned up their eyes to Chenghuang. “I don’t know what I am going to do,” Daiyu murmured.
 
Jiàn went first, blade drawn, her footfalls light on the crumbling walls. Free hand clinging to root and vine and jutting stone. Tala followed close behind, slower but more careful, Cedarheart hovering above them with low, deliberate pulses. The drone’s wings flickered now and then, like it was listening.

The shaft descended deeper than it should have, stone turning to metal. The walls wept steam, the hot gusts making Tala’s braids flutter. Condensation made the metal slick. Somewhere below, metal shifted — slow, deliberate — like breath drawn through teeth of iron. The deeper they climbed, the more the silence bent, not empty but strained.

Jiàn dropped to the ground first, boots splashing into a thin sheet of lukewarm water. Her mist blade hissed softly at her side, uneasy in the thickened air. Tala landed behind her, Cedarheart hovering just above her shoulder, wings spread in a protective arc.

At the bottom, the tunnel opened into a chamber that had no right to exist; carved from bedrock but layered in brass plates, gear-studded beams, and bone-pale piping. The lights in the walls pulsed faintly, like lungs stitched together from incompatible pieces, breathing through gritted teeth.

Something had been built here. Or worse — assembled.

Tala’s breath caught. Her hand went to Cedarheart’s chassis, grounding herself against its cedar shell.

Jiàn glanced over, one brow raised.

“I-I can feel them,” Tala whispered, horrified. “In the pistons. In the pipes.”

The pulsing lights cast flickering glimpses into the dark.

It loomed twice a man’s height, a monstrous fusion of wrecked machines and desperate ambition. Its torso was a patchwork of rusted automaton plating, ribcage cinched tight around a sputtering furnace core that exhaled steam like dying breath. Limbs jutted from mismatched aether frames and colonial drone carcasses. One arm scraped the ground with the grinding elegance of lacquered wood strung with sinew-taut cabling, while the other jerked in sharp, metallic spasms like a butchered automaton still trying to move.

Its “face” was a horror in itself: a warped skull of copper plating and fractured porcelain masks — some Eastern, others foreign and unfamiliar, all cracked and incomplete. Wires spilled like hair from the back of its head, twitching with a mindless energy. At its center, where eyes might have been, a pane of black glass flickered faintly with a corrupted qi-sigil, pulsing like a dying star.

Not one machine. Many. Torn from their purposes and bound into one cursed body.

It looked like someone had tried to rebuild an echo-machine from memory — and failed.

Or refused to stop trying.

Jiàn froze beside her. Even the mist blade dimmed.

Tala stepped forward as if drawn by gravity. Cedarheart clicked once but she ignored it. There was something under the metal, under the stink of oil and ozone.

Voices.

Dozens. Maybe more. Faint, layered like chimes drifting through fog.

Help—
Let me out—
She doesn’t want to—
Don’t listen—
I remember the sky—
It hurts it hurts it hurts—


Tala staggered back, clutching her head. Cedarheart whirred anxiously.

“They’re inside,” she whispered. “The spirits. They’re in there.”

Jiàn took a step forward. “They’re trapped inside it.”

Tala’s eyes were wide, glassy with instinctive dread. “Not bound, not dead — just… twisted. Like they’re trying to speak through a mouth that isn’t theirs.”

She could feel the wrongness like static in her teeth Echo-machines were meant to harmonize, resonating with soul and purpose. But this thing… it was discord incarnate. A bastardized chorus conducted by a hand that didn’t care to listen.

Cedarheart let out a rapid stutter of clicks, distressed.

The abomination stirred.

Its head swiveled toward them, impossibly slow. From the cracked seams in its chest, pale light leaked — qi bleeding through a fractured vessel. Within the shimmer, silhouettes flickered: a woman crowned in cogs, a child with brass wings, a monk holding an empty hourglass.

A voice came from its chest, layered in tones and dialects that did not belong together:

“You… brought the seed back.”

Tala felt her stomach drop.

Jiàn stepped in front of her. “Who are you?”

“We… were many. Then fewer. Then one. Now none.”
“We are the blueprint.”
“We are stolen memory.”
“We are the storm caught in a jar.”


Tala’s fingers shook. “They’re breaking. It’s tearing them apart just to stay alive.”

Jiàn’s jaw clenched. “Locke.”

Tala nodded. “This was one of his prototypes. Or… a dump site. A failed attempt to make an echo-machine without harmony.”

The lights in the walls dimmed, then flared. The machine rose higher, unstable, its many voices screaming softly like wind under a locked door.

Break the seal.
End it.
Free us.


Then the machine screamed.

Metal grated against itself as it surged forward. Jiàn moved first — blade flashing, releasing a burst of vapor that curled into the machine’s path. It staggered, shrieked again, and swung a massive limb toward her. The impact cracked stone and sprayed sparks. Jiàn rolled to the side, fluid as smoke.

Tala stood her ground, heart hammering.

“Cedarheart,” she whispered in her native tongue. “Shield formation.”

The drone flared outward, wings forming a barrier of vibrating qi between her and the machine’s second swing. The echo reverberated through the chamber — and the creature paused, confused.

The drone and blade had harmonized for an instant. The machine heard it.

“They recognize each other,” Tala said. “They’re speaking the same language.”

Jiàn didn’t respond. She dashed beneath the creature’s limb, slicing deep into a joint. Hissing steam and sparks answered her cut — but no blood, only pressure. As if something inside strained to be free.

The voices moaned louder.

Stop.
Please.
He’s still listening.


Jiàn’s next strike drew a spurt of golden qi, and one of the machine’s arms spasmed, falling limp. A spirit surged free in the escaping light — a boy with wide eyes who looked straight at Tala and mouthed: Find the third.

The creature roared again, this time not in rage, but fear.

It knew they were close to undoing it.

Jiàn nodded once. “We free them.”

Tala met her eyes. “Together.”

She raised her hand like a conductor. Cedarheart rose, wings shining with unnatural light. The blade shimmered in response — tuned to the same resonance.

The chamber became a tuning fork. One last harmony to shatter the discord.

Together, they struck.

A flare of light. A snap of qi-lines unraveling. And the machine collapsed, screaming in a dozen broken voices that faded into sighs.

When it was over, only ash remained — ash, twisted metal, and a faint mechanical ticking that didn’t belong.

Jiàn moved cautiously through the remnants, blade still humming. “Something’s still active.”

Tala knelt where the machine’s chest had ruptured. Amid the blackened qi-trails and shattered porcelain, something gleamed.

A sphere. The size of a clenched fist.

She pried it from the shattered chest cavity. Cold and hollow. A clockwork heart.

It clicked faintly, like a music box winding without song. Its surface was etched with delicate filigree, but the core was inert — no pulse, no resonance. A poor attempt at imitation and Tala’s mouth twisted in disdain.

A small rune etched in metal flared once, calling out. Cedarheart began to resonate then recoiled, wings vibrating in agitation.

“It’s fake,” Tala murmured. “A mimic.”

Jiàn crouched beside her. “A decoy,” she said. Then, after a beat: “No… a message.

She reached into the cavity the false heart had been nestled in. Her fingers brushed against a flat piece of metal. She found the edges of a panel. Jiàn pried it open.

A last exhale of hot steam burst out making the tattoo on Jiàn’s skin appear.

Inside was a small brass device still humming faintly — a dissonance beacon, tuned to suppress spiritual frequency.

“This must’ve been what trapped those spirits in this abomination.” Jiàn said flatly.

And beneath it, folded tightly and pinned beneath the housing, a slip of oil-stained parchment.

Jiàn took it out and unfolded it carefully.

The handwriting was sharp, meticulous — too neat to be rushed.

You’re not ready to hear it sing.
But you’re listening. That’s enough.
Find the third.


There was no name. But both of them knew who it came from.

Tala exhaled shakily. “This whole thing…it was just to see if we’d come.”

Jiàn’s jaw tensed. “He’s leading us.”

“Or herding us.”

Behind the ruined carcass of the machine, something shifted. The scorched wall had cracked open — a narrow tunnel gaping behind it, black and lined in more brass than stone.

Behind them, Cedarheart fluttered in quiet warning.

Ahead, the ticking continued.
 
Filial piety was perhaps the virtue most instilled into the country's youth. Shaohua learned it all his life, and he taught it himself. Parents worked hard to raise their children and indeed deserved respect for it.

But it was difficult for one to remain loyal to those who've failed him or her, relationship notwithstanding.

He'd not gone through the same experience: Shaohua's father did, over time, understand and forgive his decision. His parents never tried to force marriage upon him, either. They hadn't expressed disappointment in his lack of interest, but he wouldn't have been surprised if they felt it. Regardless, they knew well he could care for himself and would continue his father's legacy without procreation.

Women had their own unique set of problems.

Shaohua sympathized much with the woman to his side. The uncertainty that shone in her wide eyes struck a chord in his heart. Returning home was not an option for her. Given her distress, it wasn't likely she had anywhere else to go.

He couldn't leave her in such a state.

Wherever it was she'd find her happiness, he'd accompany her to ensure she got there, no matter what that meant. Shaohua would usually discourage such a thing, but her attire stated loud enough she wasn't one for the rules. She'd already run away from the problem, anyway. Why not keep going?

His skin tingled at the idea of leaving Shanghai. Fear or excitement, he couldn't tell. What would happen should her journey lead them farther than he's accustomed to? The possibilities were limitless.

It'd be unwise to get ahead of himself, however.

Chenghuang overlooked them and the hall with sensible composure which exuded stability. Shaohua hoped it reached Daiyu, and that this city's gods would extend their protection beyond its borders for her sake. To find peace wasn't a big ask. Since his own concerns were too far from his hands to fix, he prayed for hers to resolve with ease.

Ah. Even if they didn't leave the city, this would affect his routine. Bringing her to stay at his family's home was out of the question, and falling into a schedule with him would only give her troubles better chance to catch up with her.

Shaohua had several letters to write. He hated to leave the children, but the school year was almost over, so there wouldn't be much lost. There was enough ink and blank paper in his bag to cover each household. He wouldn't want to travel quite this light, though, so it would be in his best interest to stop home first.

They'd have to discuss the matter.

The rain and smog blended into a most unpleasant scent of dirt outside, but the smell wasn't strong enough to drown out the restaurants along the street. Meats, breads, noodles, and vegetables laced enticement through. Shaohua hadn't a meal in hours and could have gone for a cup of tea.

He turned his head just enough to get a better view of his new acquaintance. “Have you eaten?”
 
Daiyu nibbled her pan-fried, pork-filled dumplings. She and Shaohua sat on wooden crates, with a taller one in between them, tucked into the corner of the small food shop. The makeshift table held a steam-powered lamp shaped like a spider on brass legs, dimly shining with amber light.

The air was as heavy as her heart. “I must make my parents see reason,” she said.

“Love does not always follow reason,” Shaohua replied.

“You think they act from love?”

“I do.”

“Well,” she harrumphed a snort of mirthless laughter, “—they drive me mad, with their love.”

“In their heart, they stand with you.”

Daiyu dashed a hard glance at him. “I can stand alone,” she said.

Following a moment of silence, Shaohua gingerly laid down his bamboo chopsticks, and levelled a humble gaze on her. “I am a cut sleeve person,” he said, as if confessing.

Daiyu was familiar enough with the story of Emperor Ai of Han, who cut his sleeve rather than disturb his male lover sleeping on it. “A ying-yang person?” she questioned.

“Yes … I am duan xiu … neither man, nor woman.”

“And do you—do you have a shared peach?”

Shaohua dropped his eyes, but not before Daiyu glimpsed the ache in them. “He is a soldier at the Taku Forts,” he replied.

The Second Opium War raged. A month earlier, the British had been successful in battle and seized the previously Qing-controlled forts at Taku.

Daiyu firmed her mouth with determination. “That is where we will go,” she announced.

“What? No! It's folly!”

“We have not met by accident,” she said, with confidence. “We were put on this same path. Both of us seek a natural way of living. Both of us seek light. For you, it is found with him. For me, it is found away from here.”

“What would we do there?”

“That will come, in time. But at the present rate, the unknown appears preferable to the known.” Her head swam with possibilities. She must bring paper and ink. The journey would be rife with inspiration.

“Your parents?”

“Yes, yes, I must first talk with them … Even if it is only to say goodbye.”

***

She went home. Li Ming was still there. “I knew you would come back,” he said. “My offer is the best you can do.”

Daiyu’s chest rose and fell. “I would rather eat glass than submit to you.”

“It is not a crime to obey,” her father cried.

Her mother wrung her hands. “How did I raise such an obstinate daughter?”

The uselessness of her argument struck her full force. She marched to her bedchamber, stuffed a few articles of clothing into a canvas pouch, and strode past the enemy. At the door, she paused with her hand on the latch. Eyes glaring at the floor, she tried to collect herself, then pierced her father with a red-hot gaze. “This is no longer my home,” she said, and then exited into the night.

The last thing she heard was her father shouting her name. “Daiyu!”

***

Sleep eluded her, on a cot in the room Shaohua rented. He lightly snored, and she felt alone. She thought of the pretty whisper-bird she had seen at market. A brass automaton resembling a magpie with an obsidian beak, clockwork wings, and jade-lens eyes, it could read emotions, and respond appropriately.

She longed for that whisper-bird, and would go and acquire it before they went anywhere.

***

In the heat of midday, Rennie narrowed an eye on Zimo, the aged tinker manning his stall in the crowded marketplace. A tableful of mechanical contraptions, salvaged for resale, separated them. “How much do ye want for the whisper-bird?” Rennie asked.

Zimo placed an oil-stained finger on the brass automaton resembling a magpie with an obsidian beak and clockwork wings. Its jade-lens eyes rolled up to the old man, as if to see how much it was worth. “Ah,” he replied, “—a very special piece.” Puffs of steam escaped through tiny valves along the bird’s spine. “Your best friend, if you let it.”

“How much?”

“Four taels of foreign silver.”

Rennie was unwilling to pay such an exorbitant price. Besides, truth be told, he’d rather not reveal his heart, not even to a mechanical bird. “Ye drive a hard bargain, Zimo.”

His eyes landed upon a jewelled device shaped like a human heart, forged in burnished copper etched with delicate filigree. Its valves, cogs and gears were silent. “What have we here?” he asked.

“A broken heart,” Zimo replied. “Known as the third.”

Rennie’s eyebrows popped up. “Why the third?”

“For it to sing once again, it is in need of wing and blade.”

“So the story goes.”

“Yes, yes, so the story goes.”

A dead heart intrigued Rennie. He felt a connection. Morbid it might be, but the non-beating talisman seemed to offer validation. If nothing else, it would serve as a reminder to steel himself against what a heart might feel.

Normally, he avoided impulse, but decided he must have it. “How much?” he asked.

“For you, one tael of foreign silver.”

Rennie nodded. He paid for the stopped heart, tucked it away in his satchel, and turned about. To his surprise, there before him stood the young Chinese woman he had rescued from the British sailors. “’Tis ye,” he blurted out.

She dipped her chin. “I am Daiyu.”

“Rennie. Rennie Macpherson. Ye took your leave in such haste, there wasna time for any proper introduction.” He wondered why his tongue was running away from him. “Are ye well, then?”

“I am, great thanks to you.”

“Good, good—good to hear.”

A moment of awkward silence was followed by Daiyu announcing, “I’ve come to buy a whisper-bird.”

“Have ye, now? Bonnie. Zimo’s got a fine one.”

They turned their attention to the mechanical bird Rennie has recently rejected. Daiyu ran a finger along the valves of its spine. “It’s beautiful,” she said.

“Four taels of foreign silver,” Zimo put in.

Daiyu’s face fell. “I can’t pay more than two.”

Rennie shifted from leaning on one leg, to the other. “I’ll cover the difference for ye,” he said.

She lifted an open face to him. “Why do you do these things for me?” she wondered, in a small voice.

He felt that he could fall into her eyes. “Dinna rightly know, my own self. I’ll no’ question it, lest it proves me barmy.”

She grinned. “You are a kind man.”

Rennie adjusted Daisy on his shoulder. He felt like an imposter. “An’ what will ye call your bird?”

“Shiyun,” Daiyu replied, without hesitation.

“What’s its meaning?”

“Poem cloud.”

The transaction was completed. Shiyun flapped its brass wings, rising with grace, then dipped steam pressure to perch on Daiyu’s shoulder, its brass talons finding grip. Merrily, it chirped.

“Happiness found,” Rennie said.

Daiyu cast shy eyes up to him. “We leave for the Taku Forts in the morning.”

He recoiled. “What? Why? ‘Tis a dangerous place.”

“I must leave this place here.”

“What’s at Taku for ye?”

“Well, nothing—”

“Then, lass—dinna go.”

She furrowed her brow. “I am not accustomed to taking orders from men,” she said.

“Someone has got to separate ye from your foolishness.”

Her eyes widened. “Thank you for the whisper-bird,” she clipped, holding her chin high. “And now, I must be on my way.”

She spun on a heel, and stalked off, into the crowd.

Rennie, gaping, was left standing there. Truly, he concluded, humans were not worth the trouble.

His heart beat a little faster than was usual, reminding him that he had one.

He reached into his satchel and pulled out his recent purchase. To his amazement, the clockwork heart ticked once, like a heartbeat, while emitting one pulse of amber light, and then it went silent and dark once more.
 
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