The LAST sentence you wrote today

[Dante Dases]

She may not have been a gatekeeper to students, but to parents, outside agencies, and members of the local council she was both gatekeeper and voice of God.

 

[WellWater]

With the door closed, it was too dark to see so I opened it again, leaving myself vulnerable to more olfactory assaults.

 

[X Equestris]

She couldn’t save these folk, couldn’t raise the dead, but she could make their deaths matter.

 

[Joel_Hall]

I am going to cheat, but only because the last sentence is only three words.
But he wouldn’t have it any other way. They were home.

 

[WellWater]

The dust had not been thick upon them.

 

[hirundine]

Because I miss this thread:

If he hadn't been here when everything was grey with fog and p****** rain, Brynjar could almost have imagined himself in a tropical paradise.

 

[Homer Potvin]

“Get me out.” He hopped on the chair like a restrained, one-legged frog. “Get me out!”

 

[Stuart Dren]

For all that is holy, he thought, your country bumpkin wisdom had better extend to agricultural infrastructure.

 

[Rath Darkblade]

“Good morning,” a pleasant bass voice said next to her ear.

(Whether that's pleasant or creepy is up to you!)

 

[hirundine]

"He told us you all died."

(They got better, obviously...)

 

[Homer Potvin]

Peekaboo, motherfucker.

 

[hirundine]

Still on the handwritten first draft, which is why it's in present tense:

He's dead before he hits the ground.

I had another couple of hours writing time, but I was done for the day after this.

 

[takadote26]

I remembered the taste of pizza, and the memory grew fat and complacent.

 

[Homer Potvin]

“Well,” Bliss continued, “the ambassador is no fool.

Technically yesterday, and I only mention it because I almost never use any attribute beside "said" and I don't think I've ever written one any attribute in the mid-sentence double comma style like that. I wanted to see what would happen if I tried it. I haven't died or vomited yet, so that's something. We'll see what happens during the edit when it leaps from the shadows at me.

 

[Stuart Dren]

“Well,” Bliss continued, “the ambassador is no fool.

Technically yesterday, and I only mention it because I almost never use any attribute beside "said" and I don't think I've ever written one any attribute in the mid-sentence double comma style like that. I wanted to see what would happen if I tried it. I haven't died or vomited yet, so that's something. We'll see what happens during the edit when it leaps from the shadows at me.

'Continued' and 'added' are just as invisible to me. I use both verbs freely in addition to said.

Rebuking, panting, agreeing, or ejaculating, not so much.

 

[Homer Potvin]

'Continued' and 'added' are just as invisible to me. I use both verbs freely in addition to said.

Rebuking, panting, agreeing, or ejaculating, not so much.

"Replied" and "exclaimed" drive me batshit.