Creating great antagonists

So far, this discussion has revolved around villains, but I think it’s useful to remember antagonist and villain aren’t necessarily the same. You can have villain protagonists and hero antagonists. Protagonist and antagonist (and deuteragonist and tritagonist) are just narrative roles, while hero, villain, anti-hero, and anti-villain are more moral judgements, so you can mix and match to your heart’s content.

Turning to villains specifically, I think the truth of “You have to love your monster” hinges on how you define love. Like, I don’t love most of them as people. Many of my villains have done some abhorrent things, and most of them are utterly unrepentant. I understand them and what makes them tick, but understanding isn’t love. However, I do love them as characters. I like them, the aura about them, and their deeds in a dramatic sense.
What drives the best antagonists?
This is an interesting question, because when I think about the ones I find most memorable, it’s kind of a grab bag of different motivations. Some are all about indulging their own desires or acting to further their own interests (Ramsay Bolton, Leo Bonhart, the Joker). Some are fully convinced of the righteousness of their cause (Loghain Mac Tir, the Lord Ruler, the Illusive Man). Some act out of duty even without a real ideological commitment to the cause they serve (Tom Theisman).

For me, I think the best antagonists are defined less by their motivations than by how they interact with the protagonist or the rest of their world and what those interactions say thematically.
Tell us about your favourite antagonist from one of your works and why you think they were a good character.
My favorite is probably Rian Mac Colla from The Skull in the Tree. At a glance, he’s a humble carpenter in a backwater village. His friends and neighbors would call him a good, hard-working man. But he’s secretly made a deal with a demon to curse his childhood sweetheart. She married another man while he was off on his apprenticeship, and he’s been seething ever since.

So he’s concocted this plan for the curse to kill her husband, their unborn children, and leave her life in ruins so he can swoop in to play the consoling hero. Then she’ll marry him because it’s what he deserves, of course.

He’s no physical threat to the heroine, and he’s honestly pretty pathetic overall, but that’s the point: this world is one where a wretched little man can cause a lot of pain and suffering, all because his love corroded into entitlement.
Do you have a favourite antagonist from a book that you have read? What made them impactful?
Turning back to “antagonists aren’t always villain”, Tom Theisman from the Honor Harrington series by David Weber.

He starts off more or less an anti-villain, an enemy naval officer who nevertheless possesses deep personal integrity and continues to serve his increasingly broken government out of patriotism. Over the course of the series, as he rises through the ranks and confronts that government’s atrocities firsthand, he becomes more and more of a hero antagonist until he ultimately carries out a military coup to restore their original democratic constitution.

By the end of the series, he’s a full-on hero protagonist/deuteragonist in his own right. And what makes it all the more remarkable to me is that he never really changes as a person.
 
I think writers gain that when they are not afraid to think about the story from the other character's POV.
I think this is important, as well. Honestly, any sort of conflict benefits from it, even if the conflict is between the protagonist and a sidekick or romantic interest. Bonus: also a good skill to hone in real life.
she's so manipulative, and I don't understand what's going on her head.
Ooh, this is another good point and something I’ve implemented in my trilogy because I was really intrigued by the idea and it fit the villain protagonist. He is manipulative. Something I've noticed with main characters (and will make me a bit bored) is that you can usually kind of know what they’re going to do because they don’t hide it. So my solution, while writing first person present - make my MC be vague. I’ve tried to give him a veil that he can hide his thoughts and ideas behind (when I want him to) to remove a little of that transparency that main characters, and especially first person POV characters, have. Again, it fits this character perfectly. Though this aspect of the trilogy definitely needs some revisions work, it’s something specific that I’m excited to sharpen and give more teeth.
 
I think this is important, as well. Honestly, any sort of conflict benefits from it, even if the conflict is between the protagonist and a sidekick or romantic interest. Bonus: also a good skill to hone in real life.
Thanks. It's honestly fun to do and yeah, it's a good skill that can be applied to real life. :)

Something I've noticed with main characters (and will make me a bit bored) is that you can usually kind of know what they’re going to do because they don’t hide it.
I would agree with this in most cases, but I know many will be thrown by what my MCs do. Because many would be classified as villains in other stories. But yes, I think the reader has expectations of the heroes that are usually on a set path.
So my solution, while writing first person present - make my MC be vague. I’ve tried to give him a veil that he can hide his thoughts and ideas behind
Oh, this is interesting. I think one can also do this in any tense, but I see how this adds another layer of mystery. I like it.
 
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