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I need to start reading the instructions. I was on the All Poetry site and dropped a poem in for critique. They asked me to make a comment on a couple of poems before I could add another. That seemed fair, so I laid into a poem that was 'free verse' as I would expect this forum to do. Then I read the instructions. It said, NO critique, just make happy comments on how well they're doing. Whoops... The next poem my comment was... What a wonderful poem ...
 
So, time to think about the August short story contest. the prompt is "clone society."

First question - write it from the POV of a clone, or not?
Oooouu this sounds fun. Hopefully I come up with an idea for this as it screams spec-fic. I'm not sure what POV would work best. Suppose it depends on the premise.

Random thing to share today - I unboxed a new fan, and Mittens, like most kitties, was immediately drawn to the empty box. I hope she gets bored of it soon so I can break it down for recycling 😅

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I need to start reading the instructions. I was on the All Poetry site and dropped a poem in for critique. They asked me to make a comment on a couple of poems before I could add another. That seemed fair, so I laid into a poem that was 'free verse' as I would expect this forum to do. Then I read the instructions. It said, NO critique, just make happy comments on how well they're doing. Whoops... The next poem my comment was... What a wonderful poem ...

Unconditional, uncritical admiration is an artistic function that can't be superseded by AI fast enough.
 
My high school forensics coach once announced his intent to teach the traveling team how to play bridge so we'd have something to keep us occupied during off free time. He was sorely disappointed in the reaction he got from most of us.

Maybe he should've taught you all how to build a bridge. Educational and useful. ;)

So, time to think about the August short story contest. the prompt is "clone society."

First question - write it from the POV of a clone, or not?

Maybe write it from the POV of the person who governs such a society. *shudder* A society of clones, i.e. where everybody is exactly the same, sounds like the stuff of nightmares.
 

Ooh! That wasn't a minute. =P

And Brian tells them "Don't let anyone tell you what to do...!!!" right before his mother told him what to do. :)

Cue the next scene. Brian comes down to breakfast, the house is crowded, and John Cleese greets him with a jovial "Mornin', saviour!" *snerk* :giggle:
 
My high school forensics coach once announced his intent to teach the traveling team how to play bridge so we'd have something to keep us occupied during off free time. He was sorely disappointed in the reaction he got from most of us.
Another blast from the past -- in our small town my mother belonged to a bridge club that met weekly, rotating houses. I still recall how she set out candy dishes (from which I was not averse to lifting some) and she would dress up, even white gloves. Then there was the time I paid my little brother a penny to go out there and drop his pants. I remember the soft comments about how cute he was, then the shocked silence, then my mother dashing down the hall with him; I couldn't stop laughing and she threatened to spank me,
 
Another blast from the past -- in our small town my mother belonged to a bridge club that met weekly, rotating houses. I still recall how she set out candy dishes (from which I was not averse to lifting some) and she would dress up, even white gloves. Then there was the time I paid my little brother a penny to go out there and drop his pants. I remember the soft comments about how cute he was, then the shocked silence, then my mother dashing down the hall with him; I couldn't stop laughing and she threatened to spank me,
You'd have to pay me at least a quarter.
 
Four-handed card games are on the secondary list of My Ideas of Hell. They don't rank with Dallas rush hour traffic or the Norwegian Airlines customer service in Gatwick Airport, but they're right in there with a two hour concert of nothing but Shostakovich and bad amatuer productions of South Pacific,
 
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I lot of my past, there was no TV, so we played board games. Monopoly was fast-paced. No single dollar you paid while the next player was moving. Another fast pace game was Nertz. I hand-cut my cards so they fit my hand better. It wasn't unusual to hear someone gasping for air.
 
I can't play Nertz because of my back. Last 2 or 3 times I played it, I couldn't stand up straight the next day. Who gets injured by a card game?
 
I've not been physically injured by a card game, but I have suffered severe psychological damage via incapacitating ennui due to endess games of Heart. I vaguely recall playing Nertz and something called Spoons. The latter involved several people sitting on the floor, each with a deck of cards and the goal of ridding oneself of the deck quickly. Lots of lunging and slapping down of cards was involved, creating a sort of full-contact card sport. I liked that better than other card games.

Having said that, I've spent many mellow hours playing Solitaire. It provides solace and a calming effect when caught on the phone with a person who talks for an hour without drawing breath.
 
Don, literally a poor man's version of Bridge, I played extensively for 18 months as volunteer in a homeless hostel. Good way to spend the time for lots of reasons, though my devotion did contribute to the nickname that became my temporary identity, Rigor Mortis.
 
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