It Began in a Tavern (OOC Thread) (Part 2)
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It is utterly fabulous! You have a remarkable way of making the story go forward.
YAY! And don't worry! It read very well and thank you for writing it. (Also, when you have time, please make a character profile for Kurai.)
Thank you so much.
I will get to that, although there is not much to say right now.
By the way, I forgot to say that it's @Louanne Learning's turn!
Thank you!
Hey, a reissue that your turn ends tomorrow , @Louanne Learning.
I'm sorry, there has been so much going on, lots of family gatherings, so I regret to say that I have to skip my turn this time.
Okay, I understand. I hope all is well and I will get working on my post. But first, do you just need an extra day or anything? Or do you want to skip?
I think I will skip this time. Thanks.
Okay, understood!
But I will try and get it done.
take your time. I think there is some flexibility in these hazy, lazy days of summer!
Okay, thanks. I will try writing it out today.
Hey, @Louanne Learning can I use the song you wrote for Katara about the beavers? I recall it was in one of the first posts. Can I use that in my new post?
Also @ps102 and @Louanne Learning, is it okay if I cause some comedy chaos? Arspeth showing up at the tavern and not recognising them? Like, an amazing amount of chaos?
I made my post! I looped the time-line around so it begins with Katara finishing song 1 and Arspeth deciding to stay to watch the performance. Feel free to make this as crazy as you want. I figured Arspeth wouldn't expect the trio to actually perform. But now, cue more disguises, chaos and avoiding one another in a small space. Think of this like a comedy movie. Enjoy!
I'm not sure that this will work. Olive's hair has been put up in a bun, revealing her Angel Mark.
A little bit of infused humour is good, but let's not stray too far from the story we have been writing, which is not a comedy.
I think we need to concentrate on using the prompts given in previous entries to help direct the story.
For example, in recent entries:
Araspeth has mentioned the Scriptures, and she is treading carefully where Olive is concerned.
Her exact words are, "And we will maintain our distance until we understand the depths of her power.”
@ps102 has introduced Kurai the shadow, and it appears the Queen is about to give chase.
Also, it's been revealed that Olive is the daughter of Cassandra, ruler of the southern peninsula.
Also, the Queen is in possession of a mysterious, old and beaten violin.
(How can we connect all this to the girls' sideline into music?)
But it's also important to remember that the girls know they are on a journey of discovery and each one wants to find out the "truth" so I don't think they would want to dawdle too long pretending they are musicians.
And then we have our other characters - Dusca, Barnabas, Hemios, Wren, Olten, Pria...
Well done, good entry.
Hmm ... Let's keep the tone and style consistent, instead.
Yeah, I figured a humorous situation would be welcome after all the seriousness.
Well, I felt they needed a cover to travel and it made sense music would be the ticket. Katara likes writing poems, Yuuna is a magic spirit who knows music and it would make sense Ravenna learned some kind of instrument. Not to mention people don't expect traveling musicians to stay in one place for long. It would raise less suspicions overall.
Sometimes the journey takes a few de-tours and I also thought this would be a good way to have them bond.
Thank you!
That's possible. But I don't see anything wrong with a little hijinks comedy.
