It Began in a Tavern (OOC Thread) (Part 2)

I made my post! I looped the time-line around so it begins with Katara finishing song 1 and Arspeth deciding to stay to watch the performance. Feel free to make this as crazy as you want. I figured Arspeth wouldn't expect the trio to actually perform. But now, cue more disguises, chaos and avoiding one another in a small space. Think of this like a comedy movie. Enjoy!
 
Arspeth showing up at the tavern and not recognising them?

I'm not sure that this will work. Olive's hair has been put up in a bun, revealing her Angel Mark.

some comedy chaos
Like, an amazing amount of chaos?

A little bit of infused humour is good, but let's not stray too far from the story we have been writing, which is not a comedy.

I think we need to concentrate on using the prompts given in previous entries to help direct the story.

For example, in recent entries:

Araspeth has mentioned the Scriptures, and she is treading carefully where Olive is concerned.

Her exact words are, "And we will maintain our distance until we understand the depths of her power.”

@ps102 has introduced Kurai the shadow, and it appears the Queen is about to give chase.

Also, it's been revealed that Olive is the daughter of Cassandra, ruler of the southern peninsula.

Also, the Queen is in possession of a mysterious, old and beaten violin.

(How can we connect all this to the girls' sideline into music?)

But it's also important to remember that the girls know they are on a journey of discovery and each one wants to find out the "truth" so I don't think they would want to dawdle too long pretending they are musicians.

And then we have our other characters - Dusca, Barnabas, Hemios, Wren, Olten, Pria...
 
A little bit of infused humour is good, but let's not stray too far from the story we have been writing, which is not a comedy.
Yeah, I figured a humorous situation would be welcome after all the seriousness.
(How can we connect all this to the girls' sideline into music?)
Well, I felt they needed a cover to travel and it made sense music would be the ticket. Katara likes writing poems, Yuuna is a magic spirit who knows music and it would make sense Ravenna learned some kind of instrument. Not to mention people don't expect traveling musicians to stay in one place for long. It would raise less suspicions overall.
But it's also important to remember that the girls know they are on a journey of discovery and each one wants to find out the "truth" so I don't think they would want to dawdle too long pretending they are musicians.
Sometimes the journey takes a few de-tours and I also thought this would be a good way to have them bond.
Well done, good entry.
Thank you!
Hmm ... Let's keep the tone and style consistent, instead.
That's possible. But I don't see anything wrong with a little hijinks comedy.
 
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