It Began in a Tavern (OOC Thread) (Part 2)

Hello everyone,

I feel like it's important to note that because the story is currently shifting to a new phase, it might make coming up with a continuation very difficult. This is mostly because right now, there isn't really any clear direction as to where the story is supposed to go next like there was before, where the goal was to make it to Cliffcross and create a battle between everyone, which did end in disaster as planned.

This can definitely make writing the next post harder. So, if you feel like you're having a hard time with a new post, know that it's not necessarily you.

I would also say that if you're stuck for ideas, it's totally okay to come to this thread and ask for help. Maybe for ideas, or if you're stuck with some detail, please feel free to make a post here :) It's a team effort, so you don't necessarily need to write a post completely by yourself.

I'd also like to say that perhaps, it might be a good idea to discuss what the next phase is about. I know we've been writing discovery style this whole time but... what if we all work together to do some plotting? Not necessarily write a huge outline that details every little thing that happens next (I think that would be super boring), but some key plot points that cover the major events. This is so we can use those events as goal posts.

We don't necessarily need to do the above if this is not wanted though—it's just an idea. What do you all think? It doesn't need to be a massive effort or anything like that. All we might need to do is exchange some ideas between each other until there is unanimous agreement so everyone is happy.

There isn't a whole lot left. We've actually written 70k words total! That's so much, and it's honestly amazing that we have come so far. I'd say that another 15k-20k is enough to do the trick. The world is at a stage of catastrophe right now, which I think brings a lot of potential for a lot of tension through urgency. But urgency also requires a bit of an immediate threat ticking in the background. This can come from what Melina plans next. Remember that her goal is to assemble the gear, but what she wants to do remains unknown. I do actually more or less have an idea as to what this is but I think at this point, it's probably best that I stop keeping it a secret.

Thoughts?
 
This is all great information and I wanted to ask about a plot point. I know when I was in the RP, we talked about Barnabas saving Ravenna? Is that still a story thread?
It's not off the table, but for this to happen, Barnabas needs to meet Katara first—since Ravenna is with her pretty much 100% of the time.

Katara and Barnabas are characters of Louanne, so she gets to decide when that happens. She also gets to decide whether Barnabas saves Ravenna. For this to even happen, the time, place and circumstances need to be right. Basically, the moment needs to be right, and I'd say that there should also be a purpose to the action. It should have some significance to the narrative.

Regardless, it's hard to say right now because the rest of the story needs to be shaped at least a little first.
 
Regardless, it's hard to say right now because the rest of the story needs to be shaped at least a little first.
That is fair. I just thought I might put it on the table again. Does not have to happen, I just like the idea a lot.
 
That is fair. I just thought I might put it on the table again. Does not have to happen, I just like the idea a lot.
If you think about it, Barnabas has been working for Melina all this time. He's probably done a lot of wrong. Maybe saving Ravenna could be his first "good" act and doorway to many others.

It's pretty much certain that Barnabas is slowly being converted away from the queen's side. That said, he has often insisted that the queen "affords him opportunity", which I always interpreted as "I don't give a single care about her. I just like the science opportunity". I'm not sure he was ever to on her side to begin with.

Encountering Dusca seems to have caused a lot of changes to his mind though. I don't know what Louanne is planning or has in mind but the save Ravenna thing could be used to "wrap up" his conversion. Again, that's largely up to her. I don't really want to ruin the Dusca-Barnabas-Katara plot-line because it's been really good so far. What I like most is the slow-burn progression. It hasn't been half-baked, cheap and quick. Just naturally slow if that makes sense. I'm always looking forward to seeing more of how it develops. So, really, it's up to her.

It's not a huge problem either way. Sophia (aka Olive) can always heal her with Yuuna's power. Yuuna has been shown to have the ability to heal more than her host, so it makes sense.
 
talked about Barnabas saving Ravenna?

Definitely would like to have Barnabas come in on the good side for all three girls.

I don't know what Louanne is planning

Lol, neither do I!

I have to be honest, Christmastime has arrived and I am very distracted with family get-togethers!!

I suggest we take a little break over the Christmas holidays, and come back the first week of January, guns a-blazing!

@IgnitedxSoul - I'm not sure if you have started your entry yet, but if not, I can start first week of January with mine.
 
@IgnitedxSoul - I'm not sure if you have started your entry yet, but if not, I can start first week of January with mine.
I will leave this up to him. He is more than welcome to post any day before January 2nd though. But if he is caught up with the holidays and can't post even with all this time, then what you're suggesting here is a great idea. Basically, the turn comes back to you when we re-start, and then to @IgnitedxSoul so his turn isn't skipped. Really good idea!

I have to be honest, Christmastime has arrived and I am very distracted with family get-togethers!!
No worries! I'm not expecting much right now as I said. It is the holidays! Even if Soul does post, I would freeze the roleplay anyway until January 2nd to prevent your turn from happening mid-Christmas. It'd be rude to call your turn during that!

I suggest we take a little break over the Christmas holidays, and come back the first week of January, guns a-blazing!
Agreed. Let's discuss the plot stuff on January 2nd. I'm really excited to get the rest of the story going. I have so much planned for Sophia. I do apologize if I brought this up at a bad time. I didn't know people were already getting busy with the holidays!

Definitely would like to have Barnabas come in on the good side for all three girls.
However you execute it, I am really looking forward to it!
 
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